tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7375883121749958694.post4041092167843285847..comments2023-12-20T23:26:23.594-07:00Comments on Tractor Tracks: Writing...FarmGirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07109427921448753169noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7375883121749958694.post-59727965847115232062007-10-08T23:26:00.000-06:002007-10-08T23:26:00.000-06:00Hmmm.. your lines are blurry, eh? that is a bit of...Hmmm.. your lines are blurry, eh? that is a bit of a problem sometimes.. I think the best (and perhaps primary, in my use) is establishing a change of tone, either by using a different emotional timbre or letting the narrator use a different time-stance. Without clearly defining the two, you run the risk of what you've come across, and I'm afraid I haven't done any decent writing in.. god.. at Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7375883121749958694.post-1719864950166147962007-10-08T12:28:00.000-06:002007-10-08T12:28:00.000-06:00I'm having issues keeping the character and the na...I'm having issues keeping the character and the narrator separated, since I'm basically rewriting the story where *I* was the main character and the narrator. <BR/><BR/>That, and getting all of the details in without getting into information overload.FarmGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07109427921448753169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7375883121749958694.post-6103204130095267242007-10-08T09:29:00.000-06:002007-10-08T09:29:00.000-06:00Are you looking for total 3rd person omnipotent/om...Are you looking for total 3rd person omnipotent/omniescient (sp) or can you let a little lapse in here or there? <BR/><BR/>3rd person isn't all that hard, I don't think.. <BR/><BR/>-JAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com